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Feedback for my magazine pitch

An anonymous critic stated that my flatplab was very clear, and they could see the magazine layout perfectly.. I agree with this statement as I tried my best to completely make an image in the reviewers mind of my layout for the magazine.

Another critic talked about my flat plan saying it was “very effective”. They also stated I had a good colour scheme and a lot of detail; however they said I need to look more into what fonts I am going to use and lacks idea for content that will be feautured in the magazine.

One critic stated that my pitch makes a “clear point on the genre of the magazine along with a well set flat plan.” The only flaw they brought up was that it was very plain; however I will be adding more and more to my pitch.

For the final review, the critic stated that I had a clear flat plan for the front cover but need to do the same for the double page spread, they also stated that my point was very clear but needed more into it  to make it to its better standard.
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